GOOD STORY IDEA!!!!!?

I like your story so far. I do have a few sugestions. alot of characters seem to come into the story but hardly any of them seem to have alot of porpose. for example, Lost Hunter, is his only purpose in the story to tell about the firebacks? does he get of the mountain? your leaving lose ends all over the place. try, later on in the story, to tie up those loose ends.